Dr. Omar A. Alsamani/Open Library/Entrepreneurship 101 العربية
Chapter 11

Pitching and Persuasion

The pitch is the moment when weeks of work meet an audience that decides: will it care or not? A good pitch is a skill with a structure and rules that can be learned. In this chapter we cover the types of pitch, its persuasive structure, slide design, delivery skills and preparing for questions.

Chapter objectives

After studying this chapter, you should be able to:

  1. Build a pitch with a clear, persuasive structure.
  2. Apply the rules of slide design and delivery.
  3. Prepare for questions and handle them.

11-1What Is a Pitch, and What Is It For?

A pitch is a short talk in which a venture owner presents their idea to a specific audience, with the aim of persuading them to take a next step. The audience may be a judging panel in a competition, an investor, a potential partner, a supporting organization, or even a major customer.

A common mistake is for the idea's owner to think the goal of the pitch is to explain everything, so they stuff it with details, numbers and features, and the listener comes away exhausted, remembering nothing. In fact a pitch has one goal: for the listener to become interested and want a next step, such as a second meeting, a trial, support or investment. The details come in the questions and in later documents.

So before designing your pitch, answer two questions:

11-2Types of Pitch

1. The elevator pitch

Its name comes from the idea that you meet an important person in an elevator and have the length of the ride, 30 to 60 seconds, to spark their interest. It answers only four questions: Who are you? What is the problem? What is your solution? And why does it matter? It is useful everywhere: at events, and whenever someone asks "What do you do?"

Example: "Many older people need a companion for their medical appointments, and their children have to take time off work. We provide trained companions from health-sciences graduates, with simple booking and a price lower than a day's leave. We trialed the service with twelve families in Hail, and nine of them booked it again."

2. The short pitch

Three to five minutes, common in competitions, hackathons and course presentations. It covers the whole basic structure briefly.

3. The full pitch

Ten to twenty minutes, delivered in meetings with investors and supporting organizations, with more detail on the market, the financial model and the growth plan.

11-3The Structure of a Persuasive Pitch

Most successful pitches follow a similar structure, because it answers the questions in the listener's mind in their natural order. Here is what each part should contain:

1. The opening

The first 15 seconds decide whether the listener will pay attention. Start with a short story about a real person you met, a question that makes the audience think about their own experience, or a surprising, reliable number. Avoid the conventional opening: "Hello, we are team so-and-so, and our idea is…"

2. The problem

Make the listener feel the problem before presenting the solution. Who suffers from it? When? What does it cost them? Use the words of the people you interviewed; a real quote from a customer is more powerful than any description you write yourself.

3. The solution

What do you offer, and how does it solve the problem? Explain it simply, and preferably show it: a picture, a prototype or a short clip. Do not drown in technical features; focus on what changes in the customer's life.

4. The market

Who are your customers, and roughly how many are there? Use the realistic bottom-up estimate explained in Chapter 5.

5. The business model

How do you make money? Who pays, and how much? A sentence or two is enough.

6. Traction (the evidence)

This part is what separates a strong pitch from a weak one. What has actually happened? How many people did you interview? What did you learn? How many tried the prototype? How many signed up, ordered or paid? Actions are stronger than expectations, and a small real number is stronger than a large imagined one.

7. Competition and advantage

What are the alternatives, and why are you different? Do not say "There is no competitor"; the panel will take it as a sign of weak research.

8. The numbers

Price, cost, contribution margin, break-even point, and the funding you need, if any. A few clear numbers are better than a full financial table nobody reads.

9. The team

Who are you, and why are you the best people to carry out this idea? Link the team's skills and fields to what the venture needs.

10. The ask (call to action)

End with a clear and specific request: "We are looking for an organization to host the trial for a semester," or "We need SAR 30,000 for 10% to run the service in three neighborhoods." A pitch that ends without an ask leaves the listener not knowing what to do.

11-4Designing the Slides

Guy Kawasaki, the well-known entrepreneur and investor, proposed in The Art of the Start a rule he called 10/20/30: ten slides, twenty minutes, and a font size of at least 30 points. The rule's purpose is to force you to be brief and focused. In a short pitch (3–5 minutes), cut back further. Practical principles include:

11-5Delivery

Story

People remember stories far more than numbers and abstract arguments. Chip and Dan Heath explain in Made to Stick that messages that stay in memory are simple, unexpected, concrete, credible, emotional, and told as stories. So start with the story of a real person you met, and come back to them at the end.

Simplicity

Test your pitch on someone outside your field. If they do not understand it, it is too complicated. Avoid technical terms unless the audience is specialized.

Confidence and presence

A clear voice at a moderate pace, eyes on the audience rather than the screen or paper, a steady stance, and natural hand movement. Confidence does not mean claiming to know everything, but believing in what you present and knowing its limits.

Practice

A pitch that looks spontaneous has been rehearsed many times. Practice aloud, with a timer, at least three times, preferably in front of people who will give you frank feedback. And record yourself on your phone once; you will discover habits you had not noticed.

Teamwork in the pitch

If the team presents together, divide the parts in advance so each member presents what they do best, and agree on smooth linking sentences for handing over between speakers. Nobody interrupts anyone, and not everyone talks about everything.

11-6Preparing for Questions

The outcome of a pitch is often decided in the questions rather than the pitch itself, because they reveal how well the team understands its venture. So prepare by writing a list of the hard questions you expect and practicing your answers. They include:

When you answer: listen to the whole question, answer briefly and directly, and do not slip into a tense defense. If you do not know the answer, say so honestly, and say how you will find out: "We haven't tested this yet; our plan is to test it by…" That answer builds far more trust than an invented one the panel can expose with a single follow-up question.

Chapter summary

Key terms

Pitch
A short presentation aimed at persuading the listener to take a next step.
Elevator pitch
A pitch of under a minute that sums up the idea.
Traction
What proves the idea works: interviews, trials, sales.
The 10/20/30 rule
Ten slides, twenty minutes, and type of at least 30 points.

Self-assessment questions

  1. The strongest way to open a pitch:(a) Reading out the team name and members' names(b) A short story about a real person who has the problem(c) A table of contents slide
  2. During the pitch you are asked a question you can't answer. The best response:(a) Invent a convincing answer(b) Admit it honestly and say how you will find out(c) Ignore the question
  3. "Traction" in a pitch means:(a) What has actually happened: interviews, trials and orders(b) Sales forecasts five years out(c) The number of slides

The answers are on the Answers to Self-Assessment Questions page. On the interactive course page you can answer and check these questions directly, with practical tools linked to the chapter.

For discussion and reflection

Present your venture idea in 30 seconds to a classmate, then ask them: What do you remember from it?

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Chapter references

  1. Kawasaki, G. (2004). The Art of the Start. Portfolio.
  2. Duarte, N. (2010). Resonate. Wiley.
  3. Heath, C., & Heath, D. (2007). Made to Stick. Random House.